Practice 7: ''Rewriting and descriptive paragraph''.

 Exercise 14, page 32. 

 Original paragraph: 

    I live next to a park. The park is large and has tree and grass. There is a lake in the park were you can see people enjoying many activities. There are a lot of places to sit and relax. There are a lot of paths that you can walk on, and everywhere you walk you can see flowers. I really enjoy spending time in this park.

Paragraph rewritten by me:

    Fortunately, I live near a beautiful park where I have spent many years of my life playing and enjoying. At the entrance of the park there is a long way with a green and fresh grass on the sides, which is very well maintained by all people. In addition, there are giant and also small trees all over the park, and when it is spring they are filled with precious fruits and flowers. In fact, everywhere you walk you can see unique, colorful and pretty flowers that brighten the view. It is clear that I love the park, but one of the things that I like the most is the relax you can enjoy here. It also has a wonderful places where spend your time, such as a lot of paths that you can walk on and many other natural places where you can breathe peace. In conlusion, although it may seem silly, I'm proud to have this park close to home and to be able to enjoy it.