PROBLEMS:
Brainstorming:
OUTLINE:
Topic sentence: Pollution is a bigger problem than we think.
Supporting sentence: pollution is ignored by society
we are not aware of its importance
major catastrophes
pollutes the air
affects health and deaths
Concluding sentence: If we don't make an effort, the Earth will end up being a place where we cannot live and we will end up with serious health problems.
Pollution is a bigger problem than we think. Something that makes this worse is that it is ignored by society and we are not aware of its importance.
At first, it must be said that pollution is to blame for major catastrophes. It pollutes the air and atmosphere and this causes natural disasters that have been growing in recent years.
Pollution not only pollutes the air, but causes thousands of people and animals to die each year.
If we don't make an effort, the Earth will end up being a place where we cannot live and we will end up with serious health problems.
SOLUTIONS:
Brainstorming:
Topic sentence: It is true that we need to put solutions to finisg with the pollution in the Earth, by humans and by all living beings.
Supporting sentences: public transport
renewable sources
reuse
recycle
fewer toxic products
Concluding sentence: Before putting solutions, we must be aware of the seriousness that pollution really has.
It is true that we need to put solutions to finisg with the pollution in the Earth, by humans and by all living beings. At first, among the measures we could put in place is the use of public transport and renewable sources. On the other hand, we can reuse our things and recycle. Companies, for their part, could use less toxic products and thus pollute the air less. To conclude, before putting solutions, we must be aware of the seriousness that pollution really has.
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