Practice 13: How to write a strong thesis statement

 PRO/CON 

1. Government surveillance PRO 

More crime control

More security for citizens

Improving the economy 

Thesis statement: It is obvious that government surveillance provides greater control over crime and thus more security for citizens, as well as improving the functioning of the economy.

2. Gun ownership CON

Can cause accidents 

It can cause killings among the population

Some people can't afford a gun 

Thesis statement: Gun ownership among the population is definitely a mistake, as it can cause accidents and increase the number of murders. Furthermore, there would be no equality, as not everyone could afford a weapon.

3. Globalization PRO 

Greater contact between people around the world

More cultural information

Less discrimination 

Thesis statement: Globalization is necessary for the world to function better since among its advantages we find that there would be more contact between people around the world, more cultural information and also less discrimination.

4. Changing your name PRO

More freedom for transgender people

Welfare for those who do not feel comfortable with their name

More freedom

Thesis statement: The right to change one's name is fundamental in the 21st century because it is necessary for trans people, and it brings greater freedom of decision to all of society.




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